Monday, July 14, 2008

Reflections Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh these dreams,

Infantile infanticide
damned if I could
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David DeSantis
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Mark Nwagwu 15 July 2008

read this poem from top to bottom then from bottom to top and got it! simple child, do what you do - go play with words and not worry too much about all that infanticde stuff that you don't understand. Great, Dave.

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Original Unknown Girl 15 July 2008

Funny, I'm liking these word-games! Most amusing... HG: -) xx

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Sometimes, a piece on face value feels so, sort of, randomly thrown together that one things one can't relate.... until one realises that that randomness is perhaps precisely the reason one can. Pass the G & T. t x

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Delilah Miller 14 July 2008

Sounds like a drunk rush of memories, not altogether unpleasant. Great job as always

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David DeSantis

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