Wednesday, January 22, 2014
Reflections Comments
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Life can be a gamble,
but you still must roll the dice.
Even if you are a winner,
there still will be sacrifice.
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7/30/2025 6:01:17 PM # 1.0.0
A soldiers creed Jon. Well written, but if you will excuse my slight suggestion. Try and exercise a little more discipline on the last lines of some of your verses. Remember that last part of the command is quick, clean and crisp. Apply it to your writing. eg. there still will be a sacrifice. there still will be sacrifice. Just a suggestion. Stand Easy :)