Wednesday, April 22, 2009

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I cast the first stone
Into calm waters
Watching the ripples
Slowly grow and fade
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Jef L33
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Tai Chi Italy 03 May 2009

Excellent expression of the fear that we can't quite see as being us, misery in unhappy ripples, amazing imagery. We all have this, it's natural in order that we keep trying to fulfill our souls... Smiling at you Tai

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Killing Hope 22 April 2009

Really good poem, i think everyone feels like this at times, i know at least i do. Thanks.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

you speak of it so truthfully.. u indeed are a poet! marvelous work!

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