Saturday, April 18, 2009

*reflections Comments

Rating: 2.9

how beautiful the sun's reflections make
the air touched, gently rippled lakes
perfectly formed and round
on the still pond it's found
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David Taylor
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Obinna Eruchie 10 September 2009

How the razing one bestowed with rays reflect upon the glass of gushing glitter labelled as lake. Wonderful piece.

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Gina Layog 25 April 2009

I really like your creativity, your words on the first paragraph, reflects beautifully on the second, the words cleverly arranged, cleverly executed, your thoughts organized, to promote the ideas you expressed, truly a masterpiece, lovely

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Viola Grey 18 April 2009

everything about this works...a very beautiful, clever write.

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Stephanie Dower 18 April 2009

beautifully flowing, stunning imagery, deffinatly brought a smile. thank you so much for sharing.

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David Taylor

David Taylor

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