Friday, October 15, 2021

Reflection Of Her Life ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is like a desert flower
Belligerent for the survival
No respite even from the cruel weather
A battle of survival intensifies.
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 October 2021

I really like the mention of the footprints in the last line Overall, I enjoyed this poem Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

Most wonderfully worded, an ardent seasonal song, this poem deserves 5 Stars fullest!

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Deepak S S 15 October 2021

From dawn to the dusk As she waits for the rain Clouds appear and turn back....Classic.

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Martinez Salotori 15 October 2021

A sorry tale well placed in poetic form.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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