Monday, March 6, 2017

Reflection Comments

Rating: 5.0

He needs sun's reflection in the moon,
But I don't doubt in his rightness,
Imagine moonlight, what a boon!
Long live sun with the brightness,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 June 2018

This poetry and snap reveals the younger soul in friend thee like my lighter side poetry

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Rajnish Manga 07 March 2017

Beautiful expression of a simple heart craving for love even at the cost of breaking specious rules of the society we live in. Thanks for sharing the poem. I quote: He cultivates heart shaped love seeds, Sown only in moonlight and that he needs. My goal is love of a lovely friend,

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Kelly Kurt 06 March 2017

Inspiration from fellow poets is a big reason I work hard to stay on this site

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Khalid Saifullah 06 March 2017

A lovely poem............................................................

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