Thursday, December 10, 2009

Reflection Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see someone staring at me,
There face full of pain and sorrow,
I try to touch her,
But she faded away.
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lorissa cowan
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Craig Anderson 10 December 2009

Wow...that was a kicker in the end. A haunting piece that drew me into your world, what more can a poet wish for. Watch that spelling Lorissa, I don't care but others will. Excellent. Best Regards. Craig.

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