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Nice poem Jinal my friend, yes the daily routine we live by has banned all these simple but life pleasing things. Can't remember when was a last time I sat and watched the sinking sun, I used to love watching it. Once in 8 years I took my wife and kids and we took a slow drive in the evening and we went to a place where we could see it...I miss butterflies cos I seldom see them now, I'm always too busy to waste my time on unimportant things and that is the thought that alienate us from good and simple life.. Great poem dear. Siya_! !

A refreshing nature poem! Very nicely written. Do coment on my newest too.

A refreshin nature poem so finely written. Enjoyd readin. Do cment on my newest too.