Friday, November 4, 2005

Reevaluations Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m not a husband to a good woman,
I’m not a father to precious children,
I’m not attached to anyone or anything,
I can easily, in a moment, cut all strings,
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Uriah Hamilton
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Shannon Chapel 30 December 2005

This piece is heartbreaking. I hope someday someone will sweep you off your feet and bring you all the happiness and beauty that you have shared with all of us through your work. S

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Sallie Howson 16 November 2005

deliberately denied yourself..or maybe just not met the right person to forge this sort of future with yet?

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t. h. ashbury 10 November 2005

uriah, time is a strange and crazy force - i have this inclination that if your tenderness was a surprise this day, it will be a tool tomorrow. give yourself the space to extragavantly bloom. it has elements of fun. salut.

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Mary Nagy 10 November 2005

Oh my gosh Uriah! I don't know how I missed this when you posted it but this is such a tender realization that you've shared! You are one of the kindest souls I've ever bumped in to. She's out there and she is a very lucky woman. Sincerely, Mary

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Ivy Christou 09 November 2005

The first time I read this I found it touching.. so touching. I still do but the second time I sensed that you blamed yourself for the lack of tenderness. You shouldn't.. if you didn't the right person so far or you've met someone but you felt she was not the right one its better to wait.. otherwise you'll end up hurting them and yourself. Don't worry.. you'll find your special one soon, she is out there waiting! :) HBH

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 08 November 2005

jesus, man. this one hit me like a brick wall. wow. moving. Jake

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Marcy Jarvis 04 November 2005

I echo Peter's appraisal, Uriah.

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Peter A. Crowther 04 November 2005

Very sincere and very poignant. Congratulations on a really moving poem

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Ernestine Northover 04 November 2005

You have a lovely way with words Uriah, and that doesn't impress her nothing will. Sincerely Ernestine

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Cj Heck 04 November 2005

Beautiful, tender poem, Uriah. This one gave me goosebumps. You have a gentle spirit and a loving heart - you just haven't met the right person yet, is all. Again, beautiful poem. Hugs, CJ

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 04 November 2005

Uriah don't give up hope, there is someone outthere for you.

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