green awaits sun to wake by warmth
dawn sees the glaze by grin of leaf
breeze touches amidst with lofty bliss
lest soul shines by own sweet breath
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what a marvelous use of metaphors sir.. your poem takes the reader to some other place.. brilliant and vibrant imagery.. 10+++ certainly.. regards prashant
The idea that only a male can achieve, Seems to be a most serious heresy, As the idea that only a male can Represent the Christ at the alter..ya it can never be the real fact... no discination can alter the scene...itis lovely poem with strongmessage....10 read mine lovely life
You are right! Since the time of Aristotle - volumes have been written by Philosophers on 'cause and effect'! It was the Philosophers of Medieval Period who attributed everythng to the -'Divine Cause' and spent their life-time in justifying the same! For your poem 10! -Raj
Dr. Subhendu, As usual your poem is rich in poetic craftsmanship and profound in thought. It is inspiring. It emerges from the silence of the sky on mountain peaks, noise on its downwards journey mingles into the infinite sea, in its silent origin and merger let's search the life's key. CP
Excellent written metaphorical poem and I feel greatly honored in being invited to read this great poem. 10++++++++++
'Life is a mystery by reasons divine'. We may never fully understand eternity in this lifetime, yet who knows what knowledge awaits us in the future? Perhaps we are already subconsciously aware. I like this poem, and I especially like the way you make me think about such things. I think each of us will find the answers in our own time.
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !