Redundancy Comments

The trees go shaken Their branches- broken Leaves go scattered All along the lane....fine expression about redundancy. Gorgeous work. Full stars.

The great imagery of this poem made me a witness of the force and power of nature. A well crafted and conveyed write. Five Stars! ! !

Oh, so well written! Nature, even when violent, gives great inspiration to poets!

Wind flowing with force is redundant, it causes trees shaken and broken, yet it is the part of nature. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.