The trees go shaken
Their branches- broken
Leaves go scattered
All along the lane
Does the wind need this much force?
To embed a waterdrop down to earth
Nov 28th,2020
The great imagery of this poem made me a witness of the force and power of nature. A well crafted and conveyed write. Five Stars! ! !
Oh, so well written! Nature, even when violent, gives great inspiration to poets!
Wind flowing with force is redundant, it causes trees shaken and broken, yet it is the part of nature. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The trees go shaken Their branches- broken Leaves go scattered All along the lane....fine expression about redundancy. Gorgeous work. Full stars.