Redundancy Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Redundancy

Rating: 5.0


The trees go shaken
Their branches- broken
Leaves go scattered
All along the lane

Does the wind need this much force?
To embed a waterdrop down to earth

Nov 28th,2020

Saturday, November 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,rain,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2020

The trees go shaken Their branches- broken Leaves go scattered All along the lane....fine expression about redundancy. Gorgeous work. Full stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 November 2020

The great imagery of this poem made me a witness of the force and power of nature. A well crafted and conveyed write. Five Stars! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 28 November 2020

Oh, so well written! Nature, even when violent, gives great inspiration to poets!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 November 2020

Wind flowing with force is redundant, it causes trees shaken and broken, yet it is the part of nature. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

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