Monday, August 3, 2009

Redifining Chastity Comments

Rating: 3.3

He sauntered by on the road
that took him away from his board
hiding his feelings fathom deep
And ensured time and again
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Alison Cassidy 19 November 2009

What a fascinating story - a parable really - with its heart of gold and it's 'message' of life. You share moments of tenderness, of the indescribable agony of loss, of despair and of hope in a tale that compels your reader to read to the very last word. Your poetic expression is outstanding and you have a keen ear for the drama of language. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sameera Sameer 09 August 2009

10+++++++++++++++++++

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Ruth Walters 04 August 2009

An interesting story. Ruthy: -)

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