Wednesday, May 16, 2018

Redemption In Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

let it pour
let the rain come down
let it rain more
for evil lives all around
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Aqua Flower
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Khairul Ahsan 01 June 2018

Rain is a great cleanser. It cleanses and washes away dirt from the pavements, courtyards, open fields and river banks. I live and grew up in a country that receives a lot of Monsoon rain. Welcome to PH in your new guise. Perhaps rain has helped blossom the 'Rainbow Flower'? Please continue writing. Poetry flows naturally in you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 May 2018

Such a pleasant poem👍👍👍

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Aqua Flower 17 May 2018

Thank you, Bernard!

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Bill Cantrell 16 May 2018

I love this! ! A little different style, raining here too, a whole bunch! ! God will remove evil soon, very soon, a great poem flower!

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Aqua Flower 16 May 2018

Hello my friend....haha! yes a different style! Glad you liked it! :)

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Robert Murray Smith 16 May 2018

Rainbow Flower, let the rain come down, forever, washing away pain.+++10 Robert

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Aqua Flower 16 May 2018

Yes let it forever wash our pain away bringing sunshine galore!

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