Redemption Edited Poem by ENO SUTRAMAN

Redemption Edited



UPMARKET COMMERCE
Your Eminence is eminent, predominant, supreme in all that's not a common place or source! Come! Oh come, Commerce! Immerse ME in the spells of your golden esteem and card plasticity curse,
The cravings upmarket expenditure galore -make me sneeze, wet dream paroxysm,
To outrageous attention of all sizable denomination awe-stricken banknotes -
Learn to jump so much of human ocean, catch them dolphin style votes,
Turns on tail letter OH! More to come but first some dough,
The challenge taken? The smiles are broad? To the size
Of master visa sending pizza to the hungry man abroad?
Shine on, You Master, Visa, send some sauce and adds, delicious pizza,
To starving children the credit card and all gratuity incubus free world
-REDEMPTION PLACED TO SOME OTHER TIME OR SOURCE'
Secretory disbelieving, seeing-
exemption plea is valued, taken, all sins upmarket moved
By Eno the Dude

Redemption Edited
Thursday, April 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: market,redemption
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Every day we see really hungry kids. They shouldn't be living like this'
(The Guardian)
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