Redemption Comments

Every line is special and significant!

To my poem list to be forever reflected on! Well done Valsa! Redemption indeed! ! !

Now I am on a journey of redemption I tell myself- “Come out from this Just start anew, nothing is beyond retrieval The dawn is near and all shall be well” Lovely laudable lines!

Incredibly inspiring!

Wow! Wow! Wonderful! A magnificent manual of motivation! 100000++++%

An eloquent heart-wrenching poem. Full of such sorrow. And yet, eternal hope. Every line so perfectly crafted! Valsa, thank you for sharing your pain. And your optimism. So inspirational!

It is a very nice positive poem, Hope in future is a force to pull on.

A beautiful poem about redemption having excellent phraseology. Many thanks for sharing.

A very well rhymed lovely write. The tone of the poem is set in the opening stanza- 'my sky' covered by black cloud threatening to rain pain and vain efforts to contain the pain {! }; the realisation that sky beyond me lies blue and clear 'before embarking on a journey of redemption'. An excellent and penetrating write; demands repeated visitation. Thanks for the share Valsa.

Just start anew, nothing is beyond retrieval The dawn is near and all shall be well” A beautiful poem that encourages us to wait for a sunny dawn in a painful night..................10

Redemption is not always granted but should be actively sought Thanks, Valsa Peace

I am happy you concluded the poem with hope - the light of redemption at the end of the tunnel. The poem is gripping in its entirety. Loved particularly that night prowling like a stealthy thief. (10)

...'Just start a new, nothing is beyond retrieval' One of many amazing lines. Beautiful words expressed Valsa