Redemption Comments

You've got me standing stock still on the pavement (sidewalk - curb) there Gary, watching this fascinating exercise: - man struggling to put himself on a pedestal, and experiencing the emotions that such an achievement generates, as spectators stand tensely by in this subdued high energy situation.. .. There's a touch of something akin to the mystical in this in how you've propelled the extraordinary into a mundane scene... it's a fresh angle/viewpoint on rarely treated material these days..and savoured by this reader as the experience was by the cyclist.... and, briskly, matter of factly presented it has great attention grabbing power matching the scenario you project... Glad I eventually remembered to call round here.. I will be back soon Mr Witt. This is quality participation poetry.. regards, jim