Sunday, June 28, 2020

Redemption Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will sow the seed.
The hungry I now feed.
I will face the wind.
No more have I sinned.
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Thank you Bernard for your most kind comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 June 2020

A well crafted inspiring poem. Simply pretty...10++

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Shaun Cronick 28 June 2020

The last verse has now been rewritten and flows more evenly. It was too clunky. But this amended version might take some time (days?) to reconfigure.

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