Redemption Poem by Shaun Cronick

Redemption

Rating: 5.0


I will sow the seed.
The hungry I now feed.
I will face the wind.
No more have I sinned.

A rebirth does now begin.
New morals will now win.
To seek those sadly lost.
No matter what the cost.

My dark soul forever pure.
Gold has lost its allure.
Redemption fills my heart.
A journey so does start...

Sunday, June 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: determination
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Thank you Bernard for your most kind comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 June 2020

A well crafted inspiring poem. Simply pretty...10++

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Shaun Cronick 28 June 2020

The last verse has now been rewritten and flows more evenly. It was too clunky. But this amended version might take some time (days?) to reconfigure.

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