Sunday, August 4, 2019

Redemption Comments

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He was on death row.
Time was running out.
They were coming to strap him into the electric chair.
He could feel the electricity flowing through his body.
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Lamar Cole
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 August 2019

Serial killer, hmm payback time to get in the shoes of death that he caused others. You pictured it awesomely in a poem type and content that's rare and I like rare topics. Kudos for this great poem! Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

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Jane Campion 04 August 2019

Death is not a redeeming feature of life for anyone.

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