Thursday, July 5, 2018

Redemption Comments

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He deemed his life unimportant
He considered he was lost, forgotten
But when he shared his worthless feelings
With a good friend, one who knew him
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Lodigiana Poetess 20 September 2018

What a wonderful sentiment and so very true! Sometimes we are blinded to our own value! I really enjoyed how you structured this poem and the pace and flow were bang on! Good job Christopher! ...10++

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c aaron 08 January 2020

thank you for your reading and your comment

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 July 2018

a redemption almost as sweet As the final redemption he hopes for The one enabled by the Man above. love d very much your notes.. your value does not decrease simply because another one is not able to see it and value it.. soo true dear friend poet.. tony

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Christopher Aaron 06 July 2018

Very true my friend Tony...sadly so many people struggle with their own importance and value in life because they need or would like positive reinforcement but don't receive it...

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