Saturday, August 24, 2019

Redbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pretty little cardinal, going "Chip, chip, chip"
As from tree to bush, you flit, flit, flit
Brilliantly coloured, a delight for the eyes
Alwys flying low, never taking to the skies
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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 September 2019

This is definitely a pretty poem, dear Ma’am...10+++

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Practicing Poetess 05 September 2019

Thank you so much, Bernard! : -)

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Andy* 25 August 2019

A peep over the window sill into your world very vivid images spring from the page Beautifully penned

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Practicing Poetess 25 August 2019

Thank you, Andy. (Loved your play on words- - A peep!)

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Louis Rams 24 August 2019

the Cardinal is one flawless in flight singing with such clarity singing with delight

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Practicing Poetess 25 August 2019

Louis, thank you. The cardinal is definitely a delightful bird. Thanks for commenting! : -)

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2019

the little redbird on the sky of heart fly hither to thither with the love feature!

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Mahtab, I think I like your poem better than mine! It's wonderful the way that poets can inspire and learn from one another. Thank you for reading and commenting. Always a pleasure to hear from you! :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

Redbird! ! ! Action, Muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Glad you enjoyed it, Edward Kofi! :)

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