Monday, May 28, 2007

Red-White Pain Comments

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Shining like a pearl drop,
It trickled down her cheek
Glistening, it rolled of her chin
As the truth began to seep.
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Riham Dabapu
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where is that anger from? something that I did not get. from 'harsh betrayal of life'? is that what she wants to prove it? I'm sure that will not yet happen, she didnt yet decide of why she is in middle of pain and reality, and that will just make her cry.

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Raveendran . 28 May 2007

The speaker, sweet and beautiful - the avenger, the avenged.

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Mousheera Shafik 28 May 2007

what a great sequence, and what an enchanting discription... that's gorgeous and expressive

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