Thursday, March 5, 2009

Red Thread Comments

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Betwixt us, Honey..
There's a red thread that bonds since that day
The very day we met each other for the first time
The time that I was sure I have met someone that will vary my life rhyme
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Blue Eyes 08 March 2009

i am speechless before your extraordinary talent.

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 March 2009

As I understand it. The Red Thread is a symbol of undying love. This little piece describes this relationship between two people in love despite whatever problems they may encounter. There was very little rhythm or rhyme in this piece and that makes it a difficult thing to read smoothly. That would have made it more beautiful. But it is as it is. GW62

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