Sunday, May 4, 2014

Red Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark clouds linger upon the sky
It sits in company to my mortal pain,
Like that of a slow flowing stream passing by
Sadness and sorrow with no one to blame.
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Theany Ouy
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Esko Eskimo 30 September 2014

i respectfully disagree. your red tears are a testimony to your sensitivity and beautiful nature. I believe they shall serve as tracks for lovers to follow. they have been etched in the stones of eternal mountains, a seal of your beauty and never to be erased. the annals of time shall keep them guarded in its memory.

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2014

A beautiful write. love your ink love your emotion love your flow enchanting heart n mind. A sweet emotion flowing throughout.

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2014

A beautiful write. love your ink love your emotion love your flow enchanting heart n mind. A sweet emotion flowing throughout.

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