Saturday, August 18, 2018

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When the moon pass over the sun
The moment grasses whispered
The stars turn to seems red don't shine
Birds forgot to sing
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Shelvakumari Thachayil
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

Birds forgot to sing Everything is wrong Nothing going right Tear stays in my eyes.....lucid poetic expression! A beautiful poem! (10)

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2018

living like a doll, moon pass over the sun

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Shelvakumari Thachayil

Shelvakumari Thachayil

Kozhikode, Kerala
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