Sunday, February 17, 2019

Red Snow Comments

Rating: 4.8

It was in the communist winter in a village of Transylvania
Besides the demented cold also rabies walked the streets
The news was like some dogs broke into pieces a raging fox
And to prevent a mass epidemic
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George Asztalos
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Kim Barney 17 February 2019

A very frightening account. I was held spellbound until the end. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Chinedu Dike 17 February 2019

A heartfelt sad story well articulated and nicely told in eloquent finesse. An insightful creation written with conviction. Thanks for sharing George.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 February 2019

A good start with a nice poem, George Asztalos. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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