Red Slush Comments

this is amazing lots of detail and its amazing

this poem is awesomely sad..i love the detail...it also has alot of emotion

that was veryy tough

Oh my godddd. this poem is so sad. Great detail and like Marilyn said glad its not autobiographical, but it does happen to people a lot. Anyways, I liked this poem a bunchh.

Wow.. that had me cringing.. Amazing work!

Agreed with Nagourta, its just too much. Some of these details happens to many many girls around the world, and if they are still alive reading this, horror memory's would go back into their heads. Its too sick.. im sorry but this is my opinion. Keep writing, Gabriella

Madame, I wish I hadn't read this, and I wish you hadn't written it, espescially(sp) since it isn't true. This isn't pleasurable, it isn't scary, it isn't sympathy arousing(because it isn't real) . I know most everyone on this website is kind and will say great job, but I just can't bring myself to do it, this is just...too much... Kindly, Nagourta

I'm glad this isn't autobiographical, Allison but unfortunately it happens all the time. '10! ' for your realistic story telling ability. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

wow this is really deep...... nice job

This is really touching... keep up the good work..

Great job with this poem, I'm shivering, even though it's 25 degrees in my room. The imagery is really amazing. You should spell check your work more carefully, I noticed a few mistakes. Keep writing!