Red Rum Comments

Stephen King's epic condensed into a vivid and affecting piece of poetry. S :)

sounds like something i would do!

GREAT POEM HOMES LOVE IT XoXoXo SHASTA

remindds me of a movie or at least it should be a movie love it 10 pts

wow, i love it its such a sad but true and honest piece it makes you think

At little homocidal but at least it ends with me keeping guessing.Good ryhme scheme

wow this is really gripping - I love every word - it's great. The structure of it is amazing and it makes the reader just want to keep reading. It ends unexpectedly but that's what I like about it it's gripping and fantastic! ! :) hope you've had a nice day x

this is a perfect example of y, if ur gonna get drunk, u should bury the axes and sh! t first. tehe

my eyes wide in pain and fear will the rum stop what i truly fear such things should not happen

The shining bro.......fantastic job..raw talent hippy..'10' keep'm coming best to you Jon

Red Rum as in Mur Der? I love this, you express emotion beautifully. Long time no speak though! Effie xx

Good work. Another good poem. Keep it up. This shows exactly how dangerously addictive drugs and alcohol can be. Be careful, or you'll end up like me........lol........keep up the good work.

good poem cuzin i like it alot...

You deffinetly did it again. You seemed to amaze me with this poem too! I felt the emotion, I captured the image of what was going on in my head. This poem can deffinetly make readers want to read more, and more, and more! You have a way of not letting a reader get uninterested. The cool twist to this poem was its almost like a movie when the dad went nuts and is drinking his problems away. haha loved it. Realy great stuff. I want to read ALL of your poems, I just don't have the time right now. Sorry. Keep this shitt up though ahah. with all my love, Meghan Rhy

AWESOME! ! ! 'The acts of men' < great. Love it. -Kylie M. Lynch

wow that was a very good poem..i really liked it.it's worth the 10! ~HAZEL..