Saturday, September 16, 2017

Red Roses Comments

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Those days were gone
When I was your flute
and you were the breath
Together we produced
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Rini Shibu
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2017

Mind and soul! ! With positive morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks for reading and commenting Edward

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Dev Anand 21 September 2017

When I was your flute and you were the breath Together we produced mind blowing tones..........Sad tones but still adoring ur lover. very nice poem.. thank u.. dev

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Rini Shibu 21 September 2017

Thanks Dev for the lovely remarks

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Nudershada Cabanes 17 September 2017

When you were the breath and I was your flute. A beautiful love that went wrong.

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Rini Shibu 17 September 2017

Thanks nuder.. All from poetic imagination

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2017

Some memories of the past bring melancholy and grief and murks the life Dear Rini, you have beautifully painted this in your poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 17 September 2017

Thanks Kumar for your words Rini

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Lamar Cole 16 September 2017

This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem that could bring tears to the eyes.

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Rini Shibu 16 September 2017

Thanks, Even my eyes got wet when I penned this

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