Wednesday, July 25, 2007

Red Rose Romance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Resting in a bed of red rose romance. Swallowed whole by a silent symphony of a smothered starlet slow dance, engulfed by an eyeless dusk; the soft smell of muslin and musk. Warmth wrapping around us like a woman's womb. Caught in contractions ready to be birthed soon. Held in the heavy arms of humidity, the darkness, damp and quite comforting. Beneath the bedsheets: this is you and me.

Pressed against the dampened flesh of a stranger scarcely met, the surface of her somatic shell shaking and soaking wet; so salty... so salty... like the sea. Burried into her breast with ear to rest upon undulating chest- there- a heart beating slow rhythms somewhere in the dark. Soaking in the sickly sweet scent of sprouting summer innocence which sinks so deep into your silken skin... I breathe you in.
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RyuOh Kenshin 25 July 2007

wow, ur poem is amazing. It's filled with detail and interesting words. Very imaginative and very sensual. All of ur stanza's were on point and never lost my interest.10! ^__^ - Ryu-Oh

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