Floating down the red river
the quest for love
propels him to swim further
but he'll always stay in polluted waters
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Lovely. Tell him the river though red is safer than the many polluted rivers. Just as the red sea is pure
This is beautiful as him version. Though he might be polluted even lotus too bloom in mud. Waiting for she version.
'but he'll always stay in polluted waters as long as he's with her' - hmm!
Thank you Khairul for reading my poem....hmmmm! Yes indeed