Saturday, January 4, 2020

Red River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Floating down the red river
the quest for love
propels her to swim
but she'll always stay in polluted waters
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Carl Roussell 05 January 2020

Sounds like it is time to come ashore. A good write.

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Aqua Flower 05 January 2020

Thanks for reading, Carl!

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Bill Cantrell 04 January 2020

Time to make someone walk the plank, sad but a completely understandable poem, lovely as always Aqua!

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Aqua Flower 05 January 2020

Do or die! Haha! yes I like it! Thank you for reading Bill and Happy New year!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2020

Poignant sad she is floating in deep waters in HOPES

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Aqua Flower 05 January 2020

Thank you dear poet Hope always to keep one floating!

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