Thursday, October 26, 2017

Red Pretty Slippers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Red pretty slippers are really very pretty,
Nice foot wear we like to have to walk,
Bare foot walking is not so good,
There is danger of dust and thorn to pinch.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Unwritten Soul 29 October 2017

I like the openess of you to talk about ant topic...almost anything, that deserve a respect from me because it shows me how transparent your mind and readiness to share things with us like you friends....thats really cool you know. And i like the words you poured here..The slippers though remind me one of my friends one that he put outside of our lab, maybe when he use it during gardening because as you know in lab we should wear shoes...but that slippers you show has same shape of it but black colour hahaha.

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Chris Embrick 28 October 2017

Reminds me when I was a child. My brothers and I were always had bare feet and all the cuts, bruises, and burns that go with not wearing shoes. Something as simple as these little red shoes can bring memories. Often the simple things in life are most valuable. Thanks dear friend and poet.

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 October 2017

This is a truly an innovative write...like an ode to shoes; I am reminded of Pablo Neruda's Ode to my Socks

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 October 2017

Very nice poetic approach, dear Mahakui. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 October 2017

Service we get we cannot forget at all, I never thought such a beautiful poem may be written on slippers, but it's Mahakul Ji!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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