Tuesday, March 28, 2006

Red Plums Wild Comments

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To preserve this day, I pick red plums wild
Within my soul, I dream a while
A vision ancient, to me smiles
Of plums growing wild in thickets dark
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Barbara Attaway
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L. K. Thayer 24 December 2007

I love the repetition in the last two lines. So vivid!

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Des Gahan 22 May 2006

I envy your talent. Keep writing them!

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Barbara Attaway

Barbara Attaway

Beaumont, Texas, USA
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