Sunday, June 29, 2008

Red Moonlight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the red moon,
Where the black flowers bloom
Thou shalt lose all will.
And believe the only way out is to kill
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Shayli Harris
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u have a magnificent imagination!

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K8 777 12 November 2008

Sudden, and filled with feeling. i love the way you have constructed it this is one of the few poems of its kind that i have appreciated.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 July 2008

cost? few black flowers and moon's redness...a write full of feel...and good at it 10

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poem whore 02 July 2008

to a lovers unseen eye you write in away that bring peace to persons life. I think this is very open and heart felt, it allows me or who ever that is ready to be able to feel, are own thoughts. who care if I make sense.

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Shayli Harris

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