Saturday, July 28, 2018

Red Moon Comments

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Which day is it today, my dear?
Don't you know anymore?
So very sorry for you, it's clear
a new day as I remember, not day of yore
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 July 2018

PART FOUR: of course, I do realize those wrong words afterwards changed and corrected perfectly

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Robert Murray Smith 28 July 2018

It was clearly seen in Adelaide. A wonderfully optimistic poem.++10 ps correction for soliloquy

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PART ONE: Thank you for your response and comment. You were the very first one to give comment here, BUT what you don't know yet, I realized instantly (after having submitted this poem) about that one letter mistake (not a word mistake, but a letter mistake since I am an

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PART TWO: ambidextrous person) I cite here some lines from that poem MUST THINK TWICE, here I go: he letters changed per accident

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PART THREE: you can read no correct words anymore the i instead of an o and all that much more

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PART FIVE: but if you do that on poem hunter poem site that needs not a minute nor an hour but a tremendous long night

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PART SIX: Robert, I invite you now to read my poem MUST THINK TWICE. Thank YOU! You must believe me, I DID correct that word myself from the first minute I realize that, BUT when I open again my poem, I read your comment was there with your note (thank you so much for your

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PART SEVEN: note correction) BUT my correction who was earliest and before your comment, was not yet there. IF that could be there as quickest, then the time that you gave your comment, my poem was corrected, but due to the slowth of PH, my correction was not yet there, but PH

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PART EIGHT and the LAST PART: PH submitted my poem though. This time I need to EXPLAIN all these to you in a correct way. Thank you for your attention, Robert.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 July 2018

Sylvia, such a wonderful poem....10+++++

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Thank you so much for your sympathetic response and also for your 10+++++, Bernard. GBU!

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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