Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Red Moon Comments

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Is the moon embarrassed?
Why has she turned red?

Could it be,
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Ronald Chapman
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Stan Petrovich 08 October 2014

The carmine moon has no feelings of its own, as such. We merely feel for it, if it is a would-be Mars. The poem is all right, but too simplistic in a way that calls for more, not fewer, adjectives...and that is rare.

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Zahra Shariat 08 October 2014

too much star_gazers eye up the pretty moon!

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Zahra Shariat 08 October 2014

too much star_gazers eye up the pretty moon! !

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