The carmine moon has no feelings of its own, as such. We merely feel for it, if it is a would-be Mars. The poem is all right, but too simplistic in a way that calls for more, not fewer, adjectives...and that is rare.
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The carmine moon has no feelings of its own, as such. We merely feel for it, if it is a would-be Mars. The poem is all right, but too simplistic in a way that calls for more, not fewer, adjectives...and that is rare.