Wednesday, July 11, 2018

Red Lipstick Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

He ran into an old female friend from school.
He let her give him a red lipstick cheek kiss like a fool.
This caused his girlfriend to freak.
She treated him badly all week.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2018

Beautiful poem with amusing depiction. Full with romance and humour. The last two lines are much impressive.10

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Rini Shibu 11 July 2018

A beating is good indeed.. Good one

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