Red Lights Trailing In The Dark [ Tanka ] Comments

This is a wonderful Tanka my dear friend Nudershada...loved this poem.

Their tail lights flashing Like embers burning so bright. short and sweet. u packed a lot in such short poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony

Such a superb Tanka, dear kabayang Nuder...10+++

A captivating title that really drew me in!

Tail lights of slowly moving car are flashing amazingly in metro road. In the dark red lights are giving us trailer. This poem is very amazing and brilliantly penned...10

Great imagery of cars eating the highway.+++10