Sunday, March 18, 2012

Red Is The Color I See Comments

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Red Is the Color I See
Red is the only color she can see
Dripping from the sky sliding from the trees
Red is the only color she sees
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Jamelia Lane
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Hope Denton 18 March 2012

Wow. It was a really dark poem, but it wasn't bad. I liked it. You did a good job on it, making sense with your rhymes. :)

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