Friday, April 30, 2010

Red Faced Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I walked down the hallway I stopped a little astray.
I heard a faint little cry and was going to hurry on by,
But when I heard the faint whispers of 'Why did you go'.
I slowly walked to where you were.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Anil Kumar 24 April 2011

Enough details to imagine the place and expressions.Nice work.Thank you.

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Don Haney 21 April 2011

WOW, great work, had tears in my eyes by the end of it! Well done!

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