Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Red Droplets In The Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

She didn't want to show her
She didn't think she'd care
She didn't think anyone would notice
She was really there
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An Angel Without Wings
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... Sheila 23 May 2007

This poem brought tears to my eyes. You just want your mother's love. Do you really KNOW that she doesn't love you or maybe she just doesn't know how to communicate with you, but she wants to. I know that it wasn't always easy to communicate with my daughter. I wanted to talk to her so badly, sometimes, but didn't know what to say. And, when I'd try....sometimes she'd just push me away. Please, just give it a try and ask her to even go out for a coffee and talk. I'll bet she really wants to listen and I'll bet she really loves you. Sometimes, things just get mixed up and out of control. I really don't know your situation and I'm sorry for your reflections in this poem. Keep using your poetry to vent your pain! It really does help! Top marks for its 'realness'.

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