Friday, June 19, 2009

Red Devil Comments

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Hey, u are so beautiful,
you red devil!
looking bright and bold,
but why are u alone,
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Vijay Sai R
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warner treuter 20 November 2009

Yes, your sensitive poem is so apt. I've seen birds get themselves entangled and certain species of wild birds can die very easily just from fright. I saw that once also, a small bird that flew below deck in a tanker ship and couldn't find its way out.

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Corey Threet 06 October 2009

Very impressive poem and poet. I love the last line 'to the world, you may be someone, but, to someone, you may be the world' Very great work makes me want to read more. Thanks again and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah

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Carol Gall 22 June 2009

a natural poet you are very impressive

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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