Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Red Dawn Comments

Rating: ★3.8

Drowning in the sorrows of the past
The streets are scattered with limbs waiting for mend
They are here at last
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Michael Koelliker
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Adeline Foster 11 June 2008

An interesting construct. Almost like a villanelle. You show a lot of promise. And I am glad to see that you know that poetry is not only about teen love attempts. Good job. Adeline

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J Baker 06 May 2008

Perfect. A true poet.

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Michael Koelliker

Michael Koelliker

Victorville, California
Michael Koelliker
Michael Koelliker
Victorville, California
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