He looks is so very mean...................you can blame your daughter for the 'problem' i see here.
btw, thanks for the Poet's Notes.
i'm enjoying the poem, but i'd enjoy it even more if proofreading were more used/successful:
e.g. Life of a red ball
Is pretty said .................you really don't want said, do you! ?
for some humans, life would be easier/'not so bad' if THEY were dipped in another color/colour! ! !
it's the same for people or puppies or flowers when it comes to 'people's' ideas of what is attractive.
attractive humans [babies, children, and adults] get complimented on their looks sometimes by some people, while those humans of any age who are 'unfortunate' enough to be born or to become unattractive or even plain are not complimented or in other ways are 'left out'. now THAT IS SAD! !
but i have seen people walking dogs which (to ME) are very unattractive. well, those people either have a different outlook on dog-appearance, OR THEY SEE other attractive features they like in their dog.
it may be a cliche, but you can't (always) 'tell a book' by its cover.
oh, i am going on and on! !
this poem to MyPoemList.
bri :)
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He looks is so very mean...................you can blame your daughter for the 'problem' i see here. btw, thanks for the Poet's Notes. i'm enjoying the poem, but i'd enjoy it even more if proofreading were more used/successful: e.g. Life of a red ball Is pretty said .................you really don't want said, do you! ? for some humans, life would be easier/'not so bad' if THEY were dipped in another color/colour! ! ! it's the same for people or puppies or flowers when it comes to 'people's' ideas of what is attractive. attractive humans [babies, children, and adults] get complimented on their looks sometimes by some people, while those humans of any age who are 'unfortunate' enough to be born or to become unattractive or even plain are not complimented or in other ways are 'left out'. now THAT IS SAD! ! but i have seen people walking dogs which (to ME) are very unattractive. well, those people either have a different outlook on dog-appearance, OR THEY SEE other attractive features they like in their dog. it may be a cliche, but you can't (always) 'tell a book' by its cover. oh, i am going on and on! ! this poem to MyPoemList. bri :)