Thursday, July 6, 2006

Red Apples And Scarlet Blouses Comments

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Under the apple tree
in fall, eating
rubies the size of her palm.
Leaves falling on to her
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Ballerina With Fins
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Sonny Rainshine 06 July 2006

I think this is among your best (of those of yours I've read anyway) . It presents a very vivid (and very red) image that lingers. Good job.

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Aashish Ameya 06 July 2006

good poem dear.....keep writing

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