wild birds are gliding
in the crimson dimension
of sunset on sea
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'Red angled toward night' and 'crimson dimension' are beautiful phrases. You have a strong feel for color as an indicator of time passing.
Captivating images that enable one's imagination to capture the wonders and beauty of nature. A beautiful poem well crafted.
The picture is fascinating. The striae capture reflected light breaking up slightly on calm water, or maybe different hues blending. I invite you to read my poem about darkening redness: THE SEA INCARNADINED
Thank you very much for your words of encouragement and delight I have read and commented on your lovely poem.