Friday, September 14, 2012

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Rating: 4.5

She is a beauty to behold
Like a masquerade on display
She is wrapped with attractive garment
Her Arabian perfume oozes out ceaselessly
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Babatunde Aremu
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David L. Hatton 26 December 2013

The poem pulls you in for the reading, then gives the lesson of Proverbs 7 about the seductress in a contemporary way. Some minor grammatical problems, but not a problem for the message.

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Neela Nath Das 15 September 2012

It seems I'm reading the poem of Coleridge.Willing suspension of disbelief...

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K.ayodeji Abeeb 14 September 2012

very great poem! I dont mean to presume to know but are are u describing a 'fine lady' in the poem?

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