Friday, November 19, 2010

Red Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was the one
who never loved to live
life so long
and lonely lamenting besides
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Javaid Anwar
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2012

What web of greenery did u mean here? A poem dat intrigues me. Gud job with d expressive talent.

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Romeo Della Valle 29 June 2011

Definitely Poetry runs on your veins. Your words give you away with this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 02 June 2011

you have the talent of describing vividly every picture and scene we see in your words-write more of them.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 21 March 2011

you make us wonder and ponder on your poem, nice and catchy

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Abhay Vignesh L 03 March 2011

You definitely have an aptitude for poetry as this poem shows.Keep writing.Waiting to read more of your poetry

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Amina Kamran 22 November 2010

Red and green form a beautiful contrast, a vast concept nicely expressed

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Julius Lenjatin 22 November 2010

We create many boundaries of no-go zones to ourselves untill we realize it is not neccessary. But there is no such a pleasure than breaking these boundaries and in lieu finding that FREEDOM. Nice work. I salute you sir.

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Javaid Anwar

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